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| TLEBTD - The Cursed One | | | | THE LIGHT ENTHRALLED BY THE DARKNESS IN ENGLISH
3 books, 66 chapters, 1600 pages, M/M dark romance, fantasy, age difference, power imbalance, racial discrimination, school, angst, master/student, jealousy, possessive behavior, slow burn,
obsession, enemies to lovers
BOOK 2 - THE CURSED ONE
In this world? there were no rules that ruled this other world out there. There were no limits that should not be exceeded. Everything was vague, blurred in the darkness. Darren was wandering in this darkness, following that smell, voice, gaze? not knowing where it would lead him, but instinctively? wanting to know. Even if it caused him? deeper and stronger fear.
Every glance from Varis, at meals, corridors, lessons, detentions? every single glance became worse and worse for him. Every moment the man approached him and stood so close that Darren could almost feel the brush of his black cloak and its intense aroma as the man bent over him, pouring his liquid voice and his dark gaze into him? When he was doing things like that? like reaching out for him, taking off his hood or covering, or when his fingers were tightening on Darren?s body, on his shoulder, on his chin, on his cheek? as if it was something natural? When he didn?t let Darren go and he was only looking at him, when his gaze was wandering over Darren?s face and body and he was doing it more and more boldly, more and more often, more and more insistently? When he was telling Darren what to do, where to go, how to dress, when to do the assignments, where to do it and for how long? when he was managing Darren?s free time, keeping him in the classroom long after the lessons ended, even though Darren had done absolutely nothing to deserve detention? When he was whipping Darren by his cruel words during the lesson and then when they were alone, he was saying all those weird things Darren didn?t understand?
It all made Darren feel more and more dizzy and confused, unable to focus neither on the lessons, nor on what Joel was saying to him. He was still wandering in his mind, trying to get it all and find his way out, back to freedom, but it was so hard? Like he was locked in some cage that was tightening more and more around his flapping wings, trying to crush them and not let him fly away.
HERE YOU CAN READ A FEW WHOLE CHAPTERS FROM THIS BOOK:
Chapter 4 - "In the Rain"
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Chapter 13 - "His Gaze"
THE BOOK IS AVAILABLE ON AMAZON HERE
Comment from K.S. Morgan to "The Cursed One":
I finished reading the second book now! I spent the majority of the night and the entire day reading it, devouring it, ignoring my work and anything else. I really couldn't stop, the tale you weaved is so fascinating, so powerful and beautiful, I enjoyed every single second, it's like my dream come true.
Well, the absolutely crazy sexual tension between Darren and Varis filled every page. It was such an incredible sensation - it was suffocating, overwhelming, all-consuming. The air between these two is electrified
I can see what you meant about these two being different from Snape and Harry. In DI, Harry understood his attraction, and their relationship quickly became physical. The new books are a slow-burn - a fantastic, tickling, intense slow burn that's been driving me crazy. Yes, the differences are obvious, and the similarities mainly come from what you enjoy as authors, such as obsessive characters, possessiveness, etc. I actually found myself preferring the dynamic between Darren and Varis to the one between Snape and Harry, which is shocking because DI remains one of my most favorite works ever! I can't wait to see where your imagination leads you.
I absolutely adore how your focus lies on Darren and Varis's bond in particular. Darren is so lovely in how innocent and clueless he is, how he has just begun to barely understand the very basics of attraction (though these feelings still feel completely alien to him). Honestly, poor Varis, lol, I was so certain he'd explode at some point from all the feelings. Obviously, there is a lot of background I'm not aware of, but I felt like for Varis, it was intense lust from the first sight. I also felt like he was so not used to feeling anything like this that he keeps taking it out on Darren by being especially cruel and harsh, blaming him for his own weakness.
In the second half of the second book, he seemed to accept it more, and I loved seeing his softening attitude. You created such a unique interesting dynamic: they still have an absolutely horrifying and unequal relationship, Varis is still one of the biggest tormentors for Darren, and yet they are as close to friends to each other as they could be - they aren't this close to anyone else. I loved it so much. All the moments where Varis protects him, where he shows concern and care - something Darren's own Master keeps consistently missing; all the situations where Varis applies stricter and stricter measures to punish Darren's attackers. Can't wait to see where it goes next because I imagine that Varis' feelings will keep gaining power.
I like how Joel tries to be supportive, even though he's so ignorant, and I especially love how he comments on Varis' obsession with Darren. Seeing such an electrifying obsession through someone else's eyes always gives me a boost. I love it.
I really like that you chose Poisons for Varis. This is so much fitting that Potions or something similar would be; I love the whole division into assassins, scouts, and others, and I love the image Varis makes - such a dangerous, cruel, lethal predator, capable of moving soundlessly, of killing someone before this person has a chance to realize anything. The comparisons with spiders are so on point. I enjoyed every moment of him stalking Darren - and using his bird for it! The scene where he watched him sleep for a long time under the tree gave me chills. This is the perfect kind of character, everything I ever wanted to see in my dark romances. Also, I know it's terrible, but I enjoyed the moment where Darren got cut because of the Mongrel servant and Varis hit him and promised to flog him with such scorn, so clearly separating that poor boy from Darren, even though they represent the same class. Made me all tingly.
I'm feeling drunk on your magnificent story. It deserves all praise and love in the world, I wish I was a millionaire so that I could just give you those millions for you to write and write. Thank you so much for your talent.
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